I've taken a number of writing and language classes over the years. My sister has a Masters in English. She criticized my writing recently that I tend to write very long sentences and that I go into too much detail about things or write too exhaustively.

Where can I go to get help to improve my writing form?

Thank You!!!

I didn't find the right solution from the Internet.
References
http://www.dslreports.com/forum/r31535245-Help-with-writing
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